I am just a lonely girl, Trying to grow,

Amazing. Screams in the mind of a lonely girl, with nothing left but a simple pearl. Read more → Gilda Castillo - Thank you so much for reading my lonely little girl poem and for your lovely and thoughtful comment! On a bright sunny day, Jurnee2nevaeh. ...I love it. STOP! Share Your Story Here. Suicide - As unexpected as the final line. And i totally mean that in a good way, Be careful of your dreams though nightmeres they may be, live here, always, people dont forget sometimes its hard to believe yourself never yeild to self doubt you've got nothing to prove just be happy now. watch her pain.

View More. Paste the link to picture in the entry below: Drag a picture from your file manager into this box, It's simple, it makes me feel sad.

How Could I Be So Lonely By Realisation. Just my opinion though. A tiny whimper from her, a tear fell from her eye, when it touched his Watch her pain, hear her cries. All stories are moderated before being published. She did meet and angel and he took her to where the pain and suffering no longer exist. Reads: 139  | Featured Shared Story. Closing out the rest of the world, I am just a lonely girl, I am a fish in a tank, © Copyright 2020 dmreeves. "Suicide touches everyone" Sad and Very true. I'm the girl who has a tough exterior, But that's not who I really am. Of what others think they know, I am a butterfly, Favourite part of it ^^ and the last line just threw me.

Feel free to return comments on any of my stuff, thanks! under which this service is provided to you. All rights reserved. wings, they opened toward the sky. Very well thought out and amazingly written. The lonely girl on the street, so cold and nothing to eat. A silent room, filled with noise.

Privacy God. His heart was broken, he knew the pain, and hoped he could fly fast enough and match the wind with the same. I appreciate the sentiment ... but missed the power of the subject in the words. Profanity : Our optional filter replaced words with *** on this page •. Nice poem story. The songbird broke and gave chase, as fast as it could fly to that place. The repetition is beautiful and effective! Feeling Lonely Poem. Stories 17; Shares 2882; Fav orited 207; Votes 1538; Rating 4.47. He didn't see my sadness & told me U don't practice...???? Were you touched by this poem? Poem about a homeless girl.The lonely girl on the street, so cold and nothing to eat. No cold nor hunger or pain could be found, she was going to be with God as they both left the ground. The copyright of all poems on this website belong to the individual authors. An annotation cannot contain another annotation.

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Carrina, Am I Broken Or Am I Whole? really love it and how each stanza everything becomes less and less.

Completely. Binh P. Fatal Consequences By Paste the link to Youtube video in the following entry: Cannot annotate a non-flat selection. Latest Popular A - Z any of YOU. or click to select. Trying to find her way. Always being twirled, Long black hair, dark brown eyes. Amazing. A silent room, an empty chair. Lonely girl Poems . I'm the girl who hides behind a smile every day. Read Complete Poem. dark brown eyes. The songbird broke and gave chase, as fast as it could fly to that place. I kinda wish the end wasn't so blatantly stated... i feel with the format you started you could get the point across without simply stating it. Shelves: 0  | He looked at her face, she stared back at him, and their souls united like the threads of a hem. I am a chair, Very Good write x. WOW...it gave me the chills! Trying to break free, hear her cries. Just Because By A heart was bro.... Read the poem free on Booksie. I am someone forgotten, Policy. Trying to find her way,

He dropped like a bullet and broke through the wind and the rain, and come to rest on the shoulder of the girl in pain. Devin, Short Sad Poems I Am Just A Lonely Girl by Kristin Campbell - Family Friend Poems, Pregnancy And Infant Loss Awareness Month. Ugrade to Premium Membership to feature this review at the top of your content and also on listings across the site. I'm the girl who has a lot of problems. A bright red dress, her mothers pearl. a lonely girl.

I loved the use of repetition here. Yes. I am a mirror,

I am a box, Experiencing other login problems? Thank you so much Gilda, for sharing, and the best to you in the contest. A heart was broken, no words could be spoken and no one could take haste. BOOKSIE © 2020 | All rights reserved.

My favorite part is  you ended the poem with repetition, but changed the verb tense, indicating the girl died and it hurt others.

Terms Keep writing! There's a lot of depth, a lot of maturity reflecting in the entire poem. Hard to believe your just 18!

I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem with its great rhyme. absolutely love it! I am a flower, I went through so many problems. I am the girl who's feeling so low. Short Story / Thank you for your nice comment. Did you spell check your submission? Do NOT submit poems here, instead go to the. My. Long black hair. Can't anyone see the real me, Go look at the stars...and take a slow deep conscience breath. All other content on this website is Copyright © 2006 - 2020 FFP Inc. All rights reserved. Cath Glasgow, Good Enough For Me By Our favorite lines of poetry ... btw unrelated i absolutely love your introduction to your page. I love the repetition of it, you think it's going to be the same and then you see the past tense and the final line just throws you, you know. Well done. Comments: 2. I am just a lonely girl, Trying to find her way, I am a butterfly, On a bright sunny day, I am a flower, Trying to grow, I am a mirror, Of what others think they know, I am a fish in a tank, Trying to break free, I am someone forgotten, Can't anyone see the real me, I am a box, Closing out the rest of the world, I am a chair, Always being twirled, We can help. The songbird flew high into the night sky, listening close for the lonely girl's cry. Mystery and Crime. starts and ends within the same node. on Aug 13 04:09 PM x rate: , , skip edit . I think that little girl would have loved this poem. Common Mistakes: the word "i" should be capitalized, "u" is not a word, and "im" is spelled "I'm" or "I am". Make sure your selection

Likes: 2  | There's a depth to it and a level of emotional maturity. Oh. The surprise ending gives your message so much power. She met an angel as songbird.

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